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↓ Delve – Выпуск №676: Скорость полета
Орк мог бы представиться и на следующей странице, так как у Бри и драконихи появился повод с ним познакомиться, но аффтар - торопыга, и в итоге получилось то, что получилось.
Weights of 5 kilos and a barbell of 15 - the girl is clearly not Schwarzenegger :-)
But she looks pretty.
But she looks pretty.
The translation reminded me of a joke about a grenade that was once common in runet:
-Ты только что гранату!
- Что гранату?
- Только что!
-Ты только что гранату!
- Что гранату?
- Только что!
Thanks, bro! The main thing is to stop in time, and this is a wise decision. You have a cool mush of characters :-) But in the end, the plot of the story got lost.
I wish you a good rest, gain strength and ideas, and do not give up creativity. You are doing great.
And you also have "The Railway" - and "Tails" in my opinion, a very promising project. In general, do not abandon your realm, develop it! The basis is already there, it is strong, perhaps you just need more seriousness and attention to the main chars, of which you already have a zoo, and they all have a certain meaning and are somehow connected with each other. Select the most important of them and dance from them, since the story must have a "Main Hero" (or several), otherwise the mush is inevitable.
I wish you a good rest, gain strength and ideas, and do not give up creativity. You are doing great.
And you also have "The Railway" - and "Tails" in my opinion, a very promising project. In general, do not abandon your realm, develop it! The basis is already there, it is strong, perhaps you just need more seriousness and attention to the main chars, of which you already have a zoo, and they all have a certain meaning and are somehow connected with each other. Select the most important of them and dance from them, since the story must have a "Main Hero" (or several), otherwise the mush is inevitable.