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↓ 4пары – Выпуск №272
↓ Unsounded – Выпуск №592
Здоровенько рифмы наритмичены!
Однако, на стр 591 предлагаю такой вариант пары строк:
«Креще заместо одарит всех жизненно-важным!
Кровом, едою, одеждой да делом – здесь богат каждый!»
Опошленное "око за око" можно адаптировать и по той интерпретации: http://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=tit%20for%20tat&defid=2608252
Однако, на стр 591 предлагаю такой вариант пары строк:
«Креще заместо одарит всех жизненно-важным!
Кровом, едою, одеждой да делом – здесь богат каждый!»
Опошленное "око за око" можно адаптировать и по той интерпретации: http://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=tit%20for%20tat&defid=2608252
↓ Unsounded – Выпуск №591
↓ Unsounded – Выпуск №590
↓ Unsounded – Выпуск №589
↓ Unsounded – Выпуск №588
Atrus looked down at the clothes.
He'd never had such things as those.
He reached out with a wary hand.
The boots were soft, like desert sand.
And then he saw a bag beside.
He wondered what could be inside.
He opened it, and to his delight,
Some fire marbles met his sight.
He smiled as he saw them there.
Their simple beauty made him stare.
He turned to thank his father then,
But fast asleep was that man Gehn.
(c) Andrew
He'd never had such things as those.
He reached out with a wary hand.
The boots were soft, like desert sand.
And then he saw a bag beside.
He wondered what could be inside.
He opened it, and to his delight,
Some fire marbles met his sight.
He smiled as he saw them there.
Their simple beauty made him stare.
He turned to thank his father then,
But fast asleep was that man Gehn.
(c) Andrew
As he ate the roll of bread,
Atrus looked down at the bed.
He picked up the new D'ni shirt,
Not knowing that Rij was alert.
He heard a sound like inhaled air,
And saw that Rij was sitting there.
Atrus reached into his bag,
And tossed a roll for Rij to snag.
He grinned and scratched Rij on the head,
And then glanced at his father's bed.
Gehn was sleeping upon his back,
His breath was easy, his jaw was slack.
Atrus thought, "Who is this man?
Why did he come? What is his plan?"
With Rij watching with a worried face,
Atrus walked over at a measured pace.
(c) Andrew
Atrus looked down at the bed.
He picked up the new D'ni shirt,
Not knowing that Rij was alert.
He heard a sound like inhaled air,
And saw that Rij was sitting there.
Atrus reached into his bag,
And tossed a roll for Rij to snag.
He grinned and scratched Rij on the head,
And then glanced at his father's bed.
Gehn was sleeping upon his back,
His breath was easy, his jaw was slack.
Atrus thought, "Who is this man?
Why did he come? What is his plan?"
With Rij watching with a worried face,
Atrus walked over at a measured pace.
(c) Andrew